Coming Out of Hibernation
Coming Out of Hibernation
When I went out to wash the car yesterday
I was prepared, with my (red) bucket
of soapy water and a brush
And that made all the difference
In my straw hat, my loose pink shirt
and ripped up jeans I felt very avant-garde
I can’t explain it, It was just a feeling
like Van Gogh getting ready painting
The sun was shining
Birds were singing
It was absolutely gorgeous
I almost did a pirouette
I washed the car in a kind of trance
brushed and rinsed away
the winter bloom of green (algae)
The car seemed to respond to me
almost purring like a cat.
Up the street a dog was barking
(at a cat?) in a neighbour’s driveway
pulling on a leash, a drama I ignored
My car seemed to sigh in relief
as we continued with the spa
Splash, splash, splash
I gave myself a little shower
It was invigorating in the heat!
All last night I worried
like a dog having a bad dream
Did I turn off the hose?
Turning and turning in my sleep
Not sure if I was dreaming
But I thought I heard the car
say beep, beep, beep.
Day 25 prompt: In her poem, “The Apple Tree in Blossom,” Melissa Kwasny strings together several fantastical metaphors for the apple tree, before shifting into exclamations, definitions, and a series of nimble, tonal shifts – and seeming changes in topic – before circling around back to the apple tree. Today’s challenge asks you to write your own poem in which you use at least three metaphors for a single thing, include an exclamation, ruminate on the definition of a word, and come back in the closing line to the image or idea with which you opened the poem.
Note: just something silly
Such a sweet poem. Made me smile.
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