The Sweater
The Sweater
She wears his old sweater
darned at the elbow
frayed on the sleeve
When she’s feeling low
how are you doing? I ask
(I want to understand)
how are you doing? I ask
(It’s been thirty years)
I wait for her reply
You can go now, she says
Come back tomorrow
I’m sorry I’m not myself today.
Prompt: write a meditation on grief in the form of Geoffrey Brock’s poem Goodbye. https://poets.org/poem/goodbye-0
Heart-breaking and poignant. I love this poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kim!
DeleteStunning in its simplicity and sharpness.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your encouragement much appreciated!
DeleteHeartbreaking and poignant. You showed that grief has no expiry date.
ReplyDeleteAww yes so true, thank you
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