Beach
Tide pools filled with bull heads (tiny fish)
that wiggled in her throatwhen I talked my city cousin in to eating one.
On this rocky beach leaping one pool to the next
searching for crabs or anything that moved
the deep pools were the best.
Limpets hidden under Chinese hats
attached like barnacles to the rock
Starfish, snails and strange shelled creatures
Slippery squishy popping seaweed
Blowing loud through hollow kelp
Mimicking the fog horn and ships in harbour
signaling arrivals and departures.
Could have played all day there until dark
But the tide would rise. no surprise
We learned early to run for higher ground
And it was seldom anybody drowned.
Challenge: imagine the “music” of a place without people in it, try writing a poem that describes a place, particularly in terms of the animals, plants or other natural phenomena there. Sink into the sound of your location, and use a conversational tone. Incorporate slant rhymes (near or off-rhymes, like “angle” and “flamenco”) into your poem. And for an extra challenge – don’t reference birds or birdsong!
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